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Translation
Good Days
Oh.. good days when the sun is shining
and all the city is blooming like this song
Oh.. good days, you don't care about the garbage
and the diesel and exhaust in the air
And then you are small and suddenly wealthy
like the owner of the city
and then you are small and suddenly the biggest one of all
and these are good days when hearts expand
and people open up like flowers.
Oh.. good days and the city as if it's dressed in its finest
and you bring the scent of flowers
oh good days and one could then ride on a motorbike
so cool in the empty streets.
And then you are small and suddenly wealthy
like the owner of the city
and then you are small and suddenly the biggest one of all
and these are good days when hearts expand
and people open up like flowers.
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Submitted by Moshe Kaye on 2022-01-22
Last edited by Moshe Kaye on 2022-09-29
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Comments
Dr_Igor wrote:Good job, Moshe.
One thing I honestly don't get in the original - מביא לו. Who "him"? [@LenaPt] ?
Because 'תותחים" is totally slangy I would go more informal in the translation, e.g. "crazy fast"
Could he mean that "your" presence makes the city smell better, "you bring to him" that was what i thought.
רב תודות לנה. זה היה העוגם שלי לעשות
so "as cool as possible" ? יותר טוב?
חחח... כן כן. אני מעריך את דעתך!
Cool is cool :-)
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רגוע - Relaxed
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